Thank you for reading my work. I hope always to be a developing writer and would appreciate it if you would give me feedback on any of the following points below. Please start with the title of the piece you are referring to and be as specific as you can so that I can understand your comments. Thank you:
- What is wrong – what didn’t work?
- Was there anything missing that would have helped with the message?
- Was there anything that did not make sense to you or that was not clear?
- Was there anything you enjoyed or found helpful?
- Is this worth developing & if so why in your opinion?
Tales of the Universe 